tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8979283022035486862.post1491922535329499385..comments2022-10-22T13:51:03.364+01:00Comments on Lewis Maddison- BA (Hons) Computer Animation Arts: Le Voyage dans La Lune: ReviewAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13878141889750363571noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8979283022035486862.post-77199339027359134562014-09-25T09:46:37.060+01:002014-09-25T09:46:37.060+01:00Hi Lewis,
Firstly, well done in getting your firs...Hi Lewis,<br /><br />Firstly, well done in getting your first film review out there :) It is interesting to see you linking modern film makers 'trying to tap into the nostalgia of older movies and TV shows to gain a larger audience'.<br /><br />Couple of pointers to be made at this stage; Firstly always make sure that your film titles and quotes are in italics. This would go for any films that you mention within your review.<br />Make sure that you embed the quote into your writing in such a way that it supports your discussion - so for example, you could say,<br /><br />'Whilst "Le Voyage Dans La Lune" won't amaze people now, it definitely has the charm and personality to make people laugh and become engrossed in the world that Meilies created. As Sean Axmaker says in his review, it is " a work of pure, playful imagination, a picture book fantasy brought to life" (Axmaker 2012)<br /><br />You need to have another look at the referencing guide, to make sure that you are including everything you need in your bibliography, and you also need to compile an illustration list to reference your images - full details of how to do both here - <br /><br />http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/Harvard-ReferencingJackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com